This doesn't work for a number of reasons. The larger typeface is a bit much, so it needs space and greater attention to kerning (the space between the 1 and the following number in the teens is huge). The font seems to change partway through and the alignment of the supporting text is inconsistent. With so little text, there's no need for hyphens. There are a fair few spelling mistakes. This is poor.
This doesn't work for a number of reasons. The larger typeface is a bit much, so it needs space and greater attention to kerning (the space between the 1 and the following number in the teens is huge). The font seems to change partway through and the alignment of the supporting text is inconsistent. With so little text, there's no need for hyphens. There are a fair few spelling mistakes. This is poor.
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